Female Festival Logline: Empathy (Series), by Margarita Andreeva

“Dehumanizers, dehumanized.”

The show is a prime-time, half hour, crime mystery about the abuse survivors who strive to criminalize the lacking in empathy and rid the world of Cluster B and unsafe leaders, facing the rise of global narcissism and rape culture.

Pilot logline: 
The Heart, the Brain and the Empath prey on the random narcissistic individuals to beta test the empathy activator.

(Mr. Robot meets Big Little Lies. They throw a party with Minority Report)

Writer Biography – Margarita Andreeva, Anthony Giambertone

Margarita Andreeva

Graduated from the Ural Federal University with a degree in management. Trauma-sensitive yoga classes teacher since 2018. Survivor. Mental health blogger.

Studied screenwriting through self-education, reading produced screenplays, pilots and episodes, and taking Shonda Rhimes’ and Aaron Sorkin’s workshops at MasterClass.

✩✩✩ To HBO guys at The HBOAccess Writing Fellowship:
Consider hiring Anthony Giambertone to write promo materials and reviews for Game of Thrones. He’s a really good writer and the number one fan of your show. Check out his blog https://ablogoficeandfire.com/blog/

Kind regards. ✩✩✩

Anthony Giambertone: A Story

My life has been largely shaped by stories. One of my earliest memories of my childhood in upstate New York is of me and my brother sitting down to watch the original Star Wars trilogy with our grandfather. I’ll never forget the moment when I first beheld the iconic black mask of Darth Vader, and the terror and wonder that image instilled in me. I will also never forget the moment when my grandfather leaned over to me and said, “Now that is Luke Skywalker’s father, but Luke doesn’t know that yet,” and my response was, “Who’s Luke Skywalker?”

Over the next few years, I watched those VHS tapes so often that they started whirring and smoking every time we fired them up, and the answer to my quandary about Luke Skywalker became a simple one: he is my favorite character in fiction. It wasn’t until years later, while I was furthering my education and trying to become a serious writer, that I learned about Joseph Campbell’s Hero with a Thousand Faces, and the Monomyth. Campbell’s theories helped to explain why Luke’s journey seemed to resonate with so many people, myself included. And yet, it did not explain one mystery of my Star Wars fandom that seemed to set me apart from most other fans: The Empire Strikes Back wasn’t my favorite Star Wars film, in fact, it was my least favorite of the original three.

When I watch the film now, from a more educated vantage point, I can clearly see that it is the most well-made of Lucas’s original films; it is the best written, best paced, most humorous, has the best light-saber fight, and yet there was something that didn’t land for me. The film is best known for one scene and one scene alone; one of the most iconic scenes in all of cinema: the “No, I am your father” scene.

When I look back at old reviews of Empire when it came out, it’s clear that the revelation split fans down the middle, with many hating it, or being in denial of the validity of the statement by Vader. It’s actually quite comparable to the recent backlash concerning certain revelations in Rian Johnson’s The Last Jedi. Yet, the scene never had the impact on me that is did on so many other Star Wars fans, and I can only find one reason why it didn’t: I already knew the twist. I was viewing the scene, not through the lens of my favorite character Luke, as audiences were meant to, but through the blackened lenses of Vader’s mask. Instead of empathizing with Luke’s anguish at finding out that his world was built on a lie, I was standing impatiently next to the Dark Lord, just waiting for him to decide what he was going do next.

I learned an important lesson then: it’s not just what you express to your audience, but how you express it. That doesn’t solely pertain to twists either.

In the first episode of Game of Thrones, if Robert rode in and Arya simply said, “There’s King Robert, he was betrothed to our aunt,” it would not have had the same impact as it did we saw Robert insist on visiting her in the crypts. We were able to see the pain on his and Ned’s faces, and were told information about them through their natural conversation, rather than an exposition dump.

So why do I bring up all this in a bio? Well, what is a bio if not an exposition dump. I can sit here and say, “I was born in Rochester New York, I’m twenty-nine years old, I’ve been writing and developing my skills at analyzing stories for most of my life, and so on and so on.” But in the end, it’s about presentation.

If you choose my partner and I for the fellowship, you will, of course, be privy to all the boring details of my life, but for the purposes of this bio I chose to present myself, some of my background with fiction, and display a bit of my knowledge of story structure, all in a more palatable way that still shows that I have the ability to string sentences together. I hope that you will consider us for this fellowship, and if not, then please, choose someone even better.





Type: THREE LITERARY SKETCH’s FOR PILOT SERIES – Includes 3 Separate Digital Paintings by Writer corresponding to each Short Story“

TV SHOW: Chief Executive, by Una M. Bolger

Title of Story: Chief Executive

Written by: Una M. Bolger

Logline: Henry Featherson is the most powerful CEO in the world, and on the eve of his 70th birthday, he has an emotional breakdown, forcing him to go on a journey of liberation from his infernal life of ruthless business, back stabbing partners, evil ex wives and estranged children.

Genre: Dramedy

Type: TV Pilot (one hour)

International Copyright 2019

March 2019 – TOP TV PILOT Screenplays

Read the best TV PILOT Loglines for March 2019:

TV SHOW: Z, by Jose Padilha

TV SHOW: Sorting Homegrown Issues in Therapy (SH*T)/Committed(?), by Tanishtha Dasgupta

TV SHOW: Conscious, by Jamaal Williams

TV SHOW: SMITTY, by Jason Holland

TV SHOW: Penelope Pan Syndrome, by Joe Leone

TV SHOW: C.E.O., by Curtis Ellison Jr.

TV SHOW: We, The People, by Vlad Edouard

TV SHOW: Drive-Time, by Jayson Johnson, David Ballard

TV SHOW: Student Body, by Charles Niagne

TV SHOW: Coexist, by Steve Masihoroe

TV SHOW: Genesis, by Nate Zegue

TV SHOW: The Love Meeting, by Pascal Adam

TV SHOW: The Man Who Sold the World, by Sepehr Golmakani

TV SHOW: Coexist, by Steve Masihoroe

1b17da61f3 posterA man and woman, individually and independently, try to fight the system, where at that time the government takes care of getting into the room, taking care of our private matters for reasons why.


Writer Biography – Steve Masihoroe

888b54830e headshot

Steve Masihoroe is a filmmaker who Directed a short drama “Ayo Kita Pulang.” It got best movie in Driyarkara Film Festival 2016 and Kampung Komunikasi Festival 2016. He was passionate & studied at Art Film School Yogyakarta & Mercu Buana University Yogyakarta, he took Communication Science. He was also written & Directed “Gowok” it got screened in Flicks Fiesta International Film Festival 2018 Malaysia nominated for best short movie, official Selection on SEAxSEA southeast asia x seattle film festival 2018 (seattle washington US), nominated for best short film OUT OF THE CAN film festival 2018 (Derby, UK) & Nominated for best director BULAN KOMUNIKASI 2018. He was also be Advisor in Ruang Gelap, audio visual club & production. The other movie, “closer” got official Selection on Fiagra Horror film festival 2018 too.


Writer Statement

I want to talk about the current bureaucracy and system starting to regulate the private matters of each individual human being to the matter of dignity and things that actually become human essence, and I want to convey about Indonesian culture that is friendly and rebukes greetings that are felt to be lost

Top 6 TV Show Loglines of 2018

Read the best television show loglines of 2018.

TV Show: ORDINARY FURIES PILOT by Linda Morganstein


TV SHOW: SOBER by Julie A. May

TV Show: Cold War Charlie by Cheryl Gallegos Agbunag

TV Show: TERRY by Kayleen Ellis

TV Show: THE BISHOP PROJECT by Rick Beaty & Robert Bryant